英語作文的評語

mynameisjinjiahong,andmyenglishnameiskaci.i’m14yearsold,eenglish,andbooks,red,orange,pink,blue,shuttlecock,waternmelon,apple,erday,,hereisbeautiful!sfromhangzhou,she’s10yearsold,andlikesapples.

today,i’mveryhappy.

班主任評語：verygood!keepstudyinghard,andibelieveyoucanlearnalothere!

mychinesenameis範依昀。rstnameiskate.i’hinese.i’eplayingfootball,ameis蔣姣姣。shelookshappy,eisthreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,therisadoctor,lephonenumberis********ometomyhome.

班主任評語：verygood!yourhand-writhingisverynice.

ldn’’refriendlyandlovely.

afterthebeginningceremony,wordsihaven’ay,ithoughtipassedit.

intheafternoon,snotold,hehadbeentoeurope,etusplaysomegames,mestudentsdon’theteacherspokesoquicklythaticouldn’tunderstandher.

班主任評語：beautifulhand-writing!exceptforsomegrammermistakes,thisdairycouldbeperfect!asfortheclass,ithink